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Just Passing Through

Asphalt amnesia,
others forgotten,
racing towards gold
heart paved over.

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    June 2, 2007

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    Wow!!

    Wow! again...
    Powerful piece in ten words
    Oy!!

    Loved it!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


    • penman gold member
      June 2, 2007
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      Thanks for just passing through sweetness.


  • Floorboards
    June 2, 2007

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    profound

    very profound and thought provoking write, well written. thank you very much for entering my contest and good luck to you,
    floorboards.