Saturated streets of sorrow
holds eluded existence of
tomorrow's joy
In a list
A contest entry
- 10 entries, 10 words, prompt; Street! by Floorboards.
300 points, ended June 2, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ah tomorrow's joy, it waits with smiles while sorrow takes it time with the fine details of life - a good poem
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so true Becky,so true...congratulations on the cup
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I love how this simple contest theme of "street" has brought such a variety of entries and images, yours being no exception. You really captured a scene and an emotion by these ten words.
Best wishes in the contest!
Jo
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very good
very good, nice alliteration, quite thought provoking, well done. thank you very much for entering my contest and good luck to you,
floorboards.
p,s; i think it would be even better if you made it "street", instead of "streets", it would work better grammatically, to my mind anyway, it's up to you though!
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