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Street Music



 
August sun sinks
through an open window
street music rises

(6/2/07)



js

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  • Heart Sutra
    June 5, 2007
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  • zochit2me gold member
    June 2, 2007
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    You really are good with haiku's...makes me jealous...lol
    Congrats on the gold
    Becky


  • acqua
    June 2, 2007

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    Congratulations on the gold for this wonderful Haiku.
    You are so good at these and this one brings me right into the scene. Love it, thank you!


  • suseann
    June 2, 2007
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    Night falls fast in your neck of the woods! Ha! This is a great lill'Haiku on dazzling urban life.


  • Dienush
    June 2, 2007
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    I like this. It's a very nice description of the moment. Congrats on the gold. You deserve it


  • Whoochi gold member
    June 2, 2007
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    Splendid, and can see why it won the gold trophy!

  • Billbard silver member
    June 2, 2007
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    Great word picture.Congrats.


  • azure85 gold member
    June 2, 2007

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    You can see the sun and hear the music with this haiku. It is geat when more then one sense is included, this is really good!


  • Floorboards
    June 2, 2007

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    nice one.

    i like this, really good imagery, very well done. thank you very much for entering my contest and good luck to you,
    floorboards.


    • NoWayJo
      June 2, 2007
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      Thank you so much, Floorboards, for this comment and the trophy too. After only 20 words for two of the series of these contests, I'm exhausted. I know you probably are too!



      Jo


  • Myao
    June 2, 2007

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    This feels like quite the opposite here in Montana. We get -really- quiet at night, but I can still see the scene perfectly =)

    • NoWayJo
      June 2, 2007
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      Thank you, Mayo. I know what you mean...Having lived in Virginia a number of years, it was at first difficult getting used to all the night-quiet. But now back in Jersey again, it's was to get used to all the night noises again.

      Jo

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