August sun sinks
through an open window
street music rises
(6/2/07)
js
Author notes
IMAGE CREDIT:
http://www.animationlibrary.com
In a list
A contest entry
- 10 entries, 10 words, prompt; Street! by Floorboards.
300 points, ended June 2, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You really are good with haiku's...makes me jealous...lol
Congrats on the gold
Becky
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Congratulations on the gold for this wonderful Haiku.
You are so good at these and this one brings me right into the scene. Love it, thank you!
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Night falls fast in your neck of the woods! Ha! This is a great lill'Haiku on dazzling urban life.
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I like this. It's a very nice description of the moment. Congrats on the gold. You deserve it
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Splendid, and can see why it won the gold trophy!
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Great word picture.Congrats.
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You can see the sun and hear the music with this haiku. It is geat when more then one sense is included, this is really good!
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nice one.
i like this, really good imagery, very well done. thank you very much for entering my contest and good luck to you,
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Thank you so much, Floorboards, for this comment and the trophy too. After only 20 words for two of the series of these contests, I'm exhausted. I know you probably are too!
Jo
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This feels like quite the opposite here in Montana. We get -really- quiet at night, but I can still see the scene perfectly =)
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Thank you, Mayo. I know what you mean...Having lived in Virginia a number of years, it was at first difficult getting used to all the night-quiet. But now back in Jersey again, it's was to get used to all the night noises again.
Jo
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