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[ Why don't you just hit me ]

Why don't you just hit me
I'm tired of waiting
Everything's staying the same
The abuse is no different
Wether you're hittin' me
Or screamin' my name
I can't take this much longer
The hurt is so much stronger
I can't take the abuse
Just go ahead and hit me
You know you won't miss me
I won't say a word
Silence is all you've heard

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I'm just so tired of the verbal and emotional abuse I keep getting I wish he'd just hit me... At least those bruises would go away...

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  • ShortyDoo
    December 6, 2007

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    WOW

    this is very straight forward and blunt. i like this. it shows emotion and submission in a way. great write mom. shortydoo