Please bless my home, my toys and my fish (we only have 1 left because the other 3 swimmed down the potty),
please tell my sister that I can have more than 2 gum balls at a time (By the way she has been very naughty),
make fat cat be nice when I walk by him (so he doesn't get my toes),
and tell my papa everything is alright( and that every kid picks their nose),
keep everyone safe and warm and let them have food in their belly(I will share),
don't let monsters come in my house anymore( last time they put gum in my hair),
thanks for my garden and flowers momma said I cant touch( I think I will pick her one today),
and we sure love you and you love us I bet( how about you come to my house so that we can play!).
Amen
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From a 3 year old little girl
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If that isn't just the sweetest poem I've ever read. Very loving, a poem to melt the hardest heart.
Very cute, but very lovely at the same time.
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I'm sure you had a hand in this but it's the thoughts that are important... What a wonderfully gentle and loving expression of a childs simplicity and honesty. I'm glad you still have that within you...
Ken
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aww did a three year old seriously write this? It is most certainly beautiful!
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This is so cute! I can't wait to have little ones like this...
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Wow. This was so adorable and so cute. And wow, does that 3 yr. old make me look bad. She is so good at writing. I can't wait to see her in the making when she gets older. It's going to be amazing!! Thanks for letting me read this for it truly blessed my soul I hope you have a great night!!
God Bless YOu!!
Charles
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This poem took me back to when I was a boy and the world seemed so different. Penny chews were ten a penny and people didn't cuss and swear. We were innocents and remained that way unlike some of the youth of today. Just this morning an Asian man stole my slippers.
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That is so very cute you should be very very proud of your little boy. It gets my clap.
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Keep your clap to yourself.
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Thats my daughter, silly, not a boy..
lol
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How cute, I love Karlea!!!
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AWWWW
How sweet. Only a 3 year old could be naive enough to believe that God actually gives a crap what she wants! (Ok, and some other idiots believe), not that I am calling your girl an idiot, that I am most certainly not, she doesn't know any better! Hopefully she will learn when she gets an education! Until then, this really is super sweet.
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- I love my midget- this comment is for only you!
I dont believe that anywhere in my notes did I ask for any idiots comments like yours.
So until then, keep your rude ass comments to yourself k.
Maybe after you get an education, you will know better.
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This is super cute!
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This is so cute. Having two little boys, I've heard quite a few cute ones from them as well. Thank you for sharing.
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awww... i love this its really good!!!!!!! great job!!
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HAHAHA! That is sooooooooo cute! Love it!
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Such beautifully natural gentle and tender heartfelt words, I can nver have children, but there are times I wish could reading poems from children, listening to my newphews and nieces, or wathcing them do some dumb things children do, no malice in that comment ment, I was child once and i done some really dopey things, glad parents didnt have a movie camera till later or I'd really want to hide on family reunions.
This was was an awesome poem, really enjoyed reading it.
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Transcend All
Girl this is to cool! This piece, wow, filled with such a strong sense of innocents and love. Fragile, a child's love, a playful spirit and that humor that only they possess. of-course we had some of that once, wouldn't it be amazing to keep some of it as we get older. I know when I'm in the art studio I sometimes feel a bit of her still in there, it's amazing!
Groovy Write!
Namaste'
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awsum
Beautiful and Lovely
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this is beautiful and adorable and so much more. this has so much innocence its so.. i djust dont have words. i love this. im glad i read this. =]
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its lovely lovely and lovely .....the way it is presented is charming-- in simple words
(But it is difficult to read due to the half moon in the back ground)
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haha great one good luck
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Lolz......this was so sweet!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
~Tia~
GOD BLESS
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From the eys of a child.
A wonderful poem that portrays the innocence of children seen through one little girl's eyes. We are all born equally innocent but learnt the bad things along the way ... this is called life. However depending to some extent we are only what we live and mostly the product of our parents. We know naturally what is wrong yet let what is right get cloudy and indiistinct and this is self indulgence, and that is the biggest problem of the human race. The need for more (greed) be it power, money or chattels.
Bazza
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this was very good. ~ saddened.
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awww. that is sooo cute! I can imagine a little girl saying things like that!
Great job!
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So cute and precious! That is just a beautiful prayer from a 3 year old. I can already see your daughter become a great poet like you! I am going to read this one to my little sister, she will like it
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Beautiful
It is full of simplicity and very sweet and endearing...A reminder of what life is all about; when seen through the eyes of a child it is so easy to seee
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aww that's so cute. this would be like my prayer only no fish lots of cats and dogs. i would ask for more and for everything to be okay. this is very cute. great poem.
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we sure love you and you love us I bet( how about you come to my house so that we can play!).
This is just very pretty and most touching poem ..God bless you... thank you for sending your beautiful poem to this contest..well done..
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww
thanks for my garden and flowers momma said I cant touch( I think I will pick her one today),
and we sure love you and you love us I bet( how about you come to my house so that we can play!).
This is so awesome Mom
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Awhh, that's dead sweet I love it
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