mirror, mirror
oh so sweet
show me please
every so often I catch a glimspe of someone
someone too kind for their own good
someone very sensitive to the way people treat her
someone whose past shades the way to the future
mirror, mirror
who is she
and the mirror's face disappeared
revealing only what everyone could see
Author notes
3/11/07
A contest entry
- EASIEST contest in the world!!!!! Everything & Nothing !!!!!! by ibsons hysops.
302 points, ended June 5, 2007, 85 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - You Better Hurry! by Shakari.
440 points, ended June 7, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This piece was quite unique and beautiful! I found the ending to have caught me by surprise. Your imagery and words of romance just glow! Keep up the great work, good luck in the contest, and thanks for sharing! ALso, thanks for the entry!
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I loved this!
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