Is it really 1:00 p.m. already?
I suppose I should get up scavenge for empty bottles and cans.
Then again...
It's Friday, I think I'll just sleep in.
Wake me up if the world ends...
A contest entry
- ~ Picture Inspired contest~ Homeless by Frozentearz.
300 points, ended June 3, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I went and looked at the picture, and your poem fits well with it. You got into the mind of a homeless person, I would imagine. IMO, the poem actually works better w.o. seeing the picture, because then it catches you by surprise. And the title, so ironic- freedom. Yes, the freedom from expectations, the freedom to sleep in as late as you want, though at a price. Very well done.
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Well that was short and to the point,
wonder if that is what he was thinking?
Thanks for joining in,
Warm thoughts
Frozentearz -
Oh yes
The sleep in bit got my interest 
I'm hoping to get a big one (sleep in 
) in the morning. Well done
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