The blackened sea ruffled by the wind,
the emerald stars illuminated by the sun.
The healing fault line marring the surface
Of a world torn by love and evil.
Floating above the castle tiers,
like a cloud upon the wisps of wind,
slowly, serenely gliding at one moment,
or torrenting like a raging storm the next.
The bravery passed down in the soul,
of one with a lineage of power and compassion.
The love flowing eternally through the veins,
of one protected by the deepest magics.
The dreading heart that knows soon,
all dangers will arise and be confronted.
The hopes that all he love will live,
and the knowledge that only he can save them.
A contest entry
- Harry Potter by Corinthians13-4.
430 points, ended June 9, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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OK, it's reentered in the contest, good. Good luck!
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That would be harry!!!! lol know mistaking that. you have doon very nice here and i wish you the best of luck.....
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Ooh, interesting piece. Kinda dark, but I'm cool with that. Did you pull this out of the contest, or, via some glitch, did it get deleted? If the 2nd answer is what happened, you can re-enter it because I'm allowing prewrites. Good job.
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