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poker faces

did you ever feel life were a game
no one let you in on how to play?

the world is full of poker faces
that ridicule my smile

I wear my heart on my sleeve
trump card on display
to everyone else it seems
winning
is the most important thing


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  • a means to an end
    June 7, 2007

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    short and sweet and to the point. life isn't about winning but getting to where you want to go and if you succeed more power to you. money is important to support your self and a family if you want one. its also importnat to pay bills and sometimes buy that perfect pari of shoes or the chocolate at the special time but it isn't anywhere near the most important thing. As they say I smile for everyone else's benefit. I plant one on my face every moring. i guess you could call that my poker face. awesome point and nice write


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    June 4, 2007

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    Oh yeah...the world is full with poker faces....and winning seems more and more important. So sadly it is always another person that looses then...and sometimes all..

    Great write,
    thnxs for sharing,
    XXJeannette