Forgive I ask of thee dear heart
Forgive this sinful man
Whose cries of anguish go unheard
And death is what he plans
Forgive this weakness that he shows
This hounding voice inside
That tempts him to believing
The God he knows has always lied
Forgive him all transgressions
And ill begotten deeds
Forgive and say a blessing
For this lost man in need
And as he gathers at deaths door
Needing to proceed
Forgive dear heart this creature
Who dares commit this deed
Afraid, this terror binds him
The razor slices true
Forgive this degradation
Forgive dear heart with love from you
By Bob Fox
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wow, Idon't quite understand that, but that's the beauty of it! Like NurseyPoo ses, pen on...
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How touching. I love the way you describe the event. Thank you for sharing your talent. Pen on...
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Bob you have pain some days I know I would reach out to hold steady your hands.
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Rjeea
You are so very kind
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BEAUTIFULLY SAD
Forgive this degradation Forgive dear heart with love from you...Forgive dear heart this creature Who dares commit this deed
Words of such need to be forgiven
who among you is with out sin then let him cast the frist stone...thank you so much for sharing
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this is really good. i love the title, it's just cool. but the poem is even better, it flows really well to, which i think compliments the title or perhapes it's the other way round. anyhow the ryming is nice.. not to overpowering. all in all a very well written poem. thanks very much for shareing. keep it up.
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