Words entwine with threads of silk
through a wheel of solid gold.
Twirled skillfully by the master's hands,
is a vision to behold.
Peasants and kings alike consumed
by the fabric weaved by one,
are held a captive audience
until the last thread has been spun.
A contest entry
- ~~~Dedications~~~ by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended June 7, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a beautiful tribute to Kiran. The flow is perfect and it reads as smooth as silk. Lovely work.
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Rosemarie, This is a great poem you wrote to honor Kiran. I am sure she appreciated it very much. Congratulations on the honorable mention
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Rosemarie, This is a great dedication you did and congrats on the award. Your words are smooth as those threads of silk you mentioned. Another great write from you. Keep smiling. Jeff
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Aw, what a beautiful piece of writing. So imaginative and descriptive imagery. True genius!
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Nicely written and flowed beautifully!
K
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Thanks for entering and good luck!
hugs n kisses
preets
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nice poem annie rose
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beautiful!!!
This is absolutely beautiful! "words entwined with threads of silk through a wheel of solid gold", brilliant! i am so in awe of this poem, a total inspiration, very well done and best of luck in the contest (i don't think you really need it though)
Alex.
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Thank you so much for this piece. I cant believe it and I'm so shocked that you wrote this for me. You're a great friend and I always appreciate your encouraging words on my poetry. I am so amazed!!! I loved it, this was really wonderful. Thank you!
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