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Eyes To The Soul



When I looked into your eyes, I saw the reflection of me falling into your soul.





My One Liners

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  • LeonXwabbist
    June 11, 2007
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    Very beautiful... I loved it!


  • Lj-
    June 2, 2007
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    Lovely


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    June 2, 2007
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    Oh, I lvoe, love, love this one...how beautifully said... perfecto!!!!


    • Malabu
      June 3, 2007
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      Yeah I love this one myself

      Thanks girl....woman.....poet
      Mal


  • tara wilson gold member
    June 1, 2007

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    You're pretty good at these one liner poems ...melter of hearts...lol


  • Sweet Sorrow
    June 1, 2007
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    oppsss sorry its your fault that my words are melting.lol

    • Malabu
      June 3, 2007
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      it should be your

      *heart* girl
      Mal


    • Malabu
      June 1, 2007
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      Oh Yeah

      I had to do one of my love poems...thus this be it...sizzle baby...
      zizzzzzzzzzzz ouch...you're hot baby
      Mal


  • Sweet Sorrow
    June 1, 2007

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    hmmm...you will melt all the girls around you whith yhis line...such romantic and poetic...ohhhh...melt heart pweassssss


  • Whoochi gold member
    June 1, 2007
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    Now you have made my heart melt....


    • Malabu
      June 1, 2007
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      LOL

      They dont call me melter of hearts for nothing ya know Wooch.....again no stars..... any way......
      <----- me blushing
      Mal

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