I am bound to you by an
insatiable desire
you bring out of me
and only you can satisfy
Your eyes read the
want and need messages
my body sends to you
Words are never necessary
You know my cravings,
bringing them to the surface
You are gentle, yet firm
I surrender willingly and eagerly
I am helpless when you touch me
Fully and completely caught up
in the magic of you
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I really like this one ! Beautifully written .
My favorite lines were:
Your eyes read the
want and need messages
my body sends to you
Very nice job!
~Lisa~
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Beautifully written I loved the picture you put with this.Such passion and desire innertwined together.A very nice write10 s
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delightful and touching
sounds like complete surrender to me.
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You sexy thanggggggg you....
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SWEET! TOUCHING
The world seems so bright and beautiful when one is in love.
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Beautiful. Love is truly amazing. When you yield to someone who you can trust...you can give them all of you without worry of devastation or fear! Beautiful...
"I surrender willingly and eagerly
I am helpless when you touch me
Fully and completely caught up
in the magic of you"
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ohh this is wonderful you really are growing as a writer your work is becoming so refined and perfect well done love this is amazing xxx
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Bunnyworthy.
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sensual and caring
such an alluring image of a woman so in tune with her desires and so honest about her wants; a sensual and caring writing here very expressive and a mature sense about it... very nice..very appealing...PK
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