In a century's time
Much can change
It could be a lifetime
Or so it could be arranged
Many births and many deaths
Heart brakes and lovers
And deep dark breaths
Are taken by many presuers
Lifestyles change with time
Wars will come and go
So we can live in the sublime
Until the death bird crows
So we must deal in the now
The furture is too much
We must survive somehow
In time's deadly clutch
Author notes
For Contest: R o s e B l o s s o m 1 0 0 "Don't die live life"
A contest entry
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Well rhymed and well spoken. This was a joy to read.
Good luck and thank you for entering -
"In a century's time
Much can change
It could be a lifetime
Or so it could be arranged" a great start to a great poem! I really liked it and it is so true! great job! Thank you so much for entering! Excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!
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Very nicely done with words that many of us live in hope for.Thanks so mi=uch for joining in my contest.
Gaylene
Bunnies for all
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Nicely done.
Nicely done and well concieved and shows an imaginative mind which will be a great tool, but my only suggestion is to stay away from the dark and play out in the light for there is much beauty to behold, but often you must seek it and yet most times it is just for the taking.. Keep writing as I believe that there is much better to come .. I like your personality that I have seen so far so take care. If ever I can help, I am as close as your fingertips ... That is a saying I invented only today ..
Bazza (Barry)
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Nice rhyme all the way down and good message. Sort of hang on well make it type. I like it.
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