Share with me everyhting
There's no telling what time and rest will bring
Hurt me if you want to
No matter what, I'll always love you
As long as it makes you feel okay again
If you want to talk, just tell me when
Give me your black clouds, and I'll make them a little less grey
I'll be your little sponge, and soak it all away
All I'll do is simply listen,
I love the way your eyes glisten
With all the things that make me love you, that's just one reason
I want you to know, that I'm here for you hun
With every breath
just know, I love you to death
Copyright {c} 2007 Hannah Duffin {All Rights Reserved}
Hey angel, don't cry
Please tell me what you think
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Give me your black clouds, and I'll make them a little less grey
I'll be your little sponge, and soak it all away
All I'll do is simply listen,
I love the way your eyes glisten
i love that part and when you say eyes i think of green ones cause they are my favorit -
wow that was soooo good! I really enjoyed reading this piece! It was so strong and full of emotion!
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aww, thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!
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So sweet-so open to honest emotion! great write!
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i understand and relate to this. should show my lover this so that they understand that this is all i want to do instead of letting them stew over what it is wrong.
the poem was descriptive and you could feel the love and care for this person in our poem
an awsome write well done
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aww, thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it. feel free to show it to them, just make sure you keep my copyright on it, lol, not like a nice person like you would plagarize. haha
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