Every lazy summer day
Spent wasting life away
It's so great; anyone can see
The life of sloth is the life for me
Meaningless are the time and date
For with nothing to do, you can't be late
Everyday free of troubles and fears
As days turn to months, months into years
Why work hard if you can slide by?
Even if others may heave a sigh
Once you try it, then you'll see
The life of sloth is for you and me
Author notes
So yeah, my sin is sloth
username is hopelessxromantic
A contest entry
- Round 2... Invite only! by Love-Lee.
1050 points, ended June 5, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for the invite. Your poem: poetry is a method of contra/understatement. You may profess to be sloth, but that is a cover for the hard work you put into analyzing how to compose your poems and your contests. Nice work......
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lol you go girl
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Wow...
This was a wonderful write!!!!!!! Rhyming and all!!!! I love that you did what I asked and made me want to go to lay around a bit! I hate it when you enter a contest and the judge is like good luck... So I won't do that here... besides you don't need it!!
Only one thing, though I know and you know who ths is you still must put your username in your author's notes!
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thanks!! i put my username in the authors notes
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