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Sun-Kissed

The summer sun, my destiny, leans near,
And whispers in my ear, "I love you so!"
He plants a light peck on my cheek--no fear
of repercussions, and I, sun-kissed, know
no better moment that this one, right now.
Ecstatically, I dance around, so glad,
Without a future or a past.
                            But, how
can this fulfillment be? A myriad
Excuses line its way. Awake, I see
not anything but scorching, raw sun rays.
For, blazing, like a god to devotee,
He rules with burning fists and sun-kissed days.

The sun inspires me, but is it real?
Incredibly, I know--I think--I feel.

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  • Eusebius
    June 18, 2007
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    bravo

    An excellent, excellent sonnet! (as Oliver said: "More, more, please!") bravo... bravo... bravo...


  • macandrew
    June 4, 2007

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    A wonderful poem, it breathes fresh air into the room. Lovely.
    John