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Of My Love

Your love, something I cannot describe.

Your love, a reason to keep going.

Amazing.


You say that I am strong,

speaking through your tears,

pouring your heart upon my shoulder.

You don't realize the truth.

You don't realize my agony.

The bitter regrets that marr my soul.


I never meant for this to happen,

I meant to hide my sould forever,

I meant to be a healer and a wise man,

I meant to be alone.


I hate this weakness.

Love.

I hate letting someone in.

Trust.

I can't bear the thought of dying, of the tears that it would bring you.

Fear.

I hate pulling the daggers from your soul.

Healing.

I hate knowing your too good for me.


I hate it when you cry,

I give eternity for your happiness.

I hate it when you laugh,

It never lasts long enough.

I hate it when you smile,

I can't get you off my mind.

I hate that I'm so far away,

That I can't hold you in my arms.

I hate that your so perfect,

Sweet goddess of my heart.


You think that my love will fade,

You think that I tire of your fears.

Wrong.


I love you,

Your aren't your fears.

I love you,

You aren't your family.

I love you,

You aren't your scars.

I love you,

You aren't your habits.


In the end,

with the difference in mind.

In the end,

With everything I know.

In the end,

I love you with all my heart.


As a last request,

No matter where I am,

Stay strong for me,

No matter what time passes.

I need you in my life Sarah.


Never go away.

Author notes

This is my poem to Sarah. This is me, this is my heart. This is my soul.

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  • Game Master
    June 23, 2007

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    Im not sure what 'murr' or 'sould' means but I loved it, it was really amazing brovo I say. I hope you make it


  • country-girl
    June 9, 2007

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    wow this was really nice. a little repetitive, but it really got your message across. definately heartfelt. thank you for entering!!!


  • MercurialMist
    June 4, 2007
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    This is a wonderful poem! Had me wishing I was Sarah!!! Great write.


  • delicate angel
    June 3, 2007
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    amazingness

  • delicate angel
    June 3, 2007

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    This poem is totally amazing. The style is great and fits perfectly, your use of words is well thought out and special. I hope someday a guy will be able to write a poem like that for me. Good luck in this contest. I'm definitely rooting for you!


  • Florida Sunshine
    June 2, 2007

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    I believe it! I love the style you used... you kept it interesting! The poem overall is awesome!!! You can clearly feel the love1 good job! Good luck in the contest!

  • pozo
    June 2, 2007

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    Powerful poem, quite romantic but also quite dark. 'Ment' should be 'meant' and 'dont' should be 'don't'. I like your use of repetition here.
    Thanks for your comment
    Pozo


  • MurderFace
    June 1, 2007
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    =)

    YEAH I LIKE THIS 1!!
    ESPECIALLY THE 1st HALF OF IT!

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