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Deep Down

Writing away my thoughts,
My feelings,
My secrets.
For no one to see,
Will I ever loose this self hatred?
Can I ever let myself be happy?
I pretend I'm fine,
So I don't hurt the ones who love me,
but deep down I'm not over anything.
I can't face myself,
I need to get away,
To be free from this grip over me.
I need to sort myself out,
Maybe then people will like me ,
And I can stop pushing them away.

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option 4 -
-Cutting
-Depression
-Suicide

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  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    June 4, 2007

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    awww hun this poem was so heartfelt and emotional...i can really relate to what you are saying in this poem..it really hit close to home to me..depression and cutting are such hard battles to fight and ones that you fight for the rest of your life to..keep writting your talented, if you ever need someone to talk to I'm here thank you for entering my contest and good luck to you hun

    xoxoxox

    ~Chrissy~


    • -MrsWonka-
      June 5, 2007
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      thanks alot hun i appreciate it have fun with the contest xx


  • silentlyscreaming.
    June 1, 2007
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    i really like this. im going through the same thing =/
    good jo