In a torrid love affair
On a sinking mattress of down,
I came with out even exhaling.
Take my hand to help me understand the best I can
These arousing sentiments I can't hide
As the shadows begin to ride
In riffs of passion, pale silk skin
Who says there needs to be an Adam for my delicate Eve,
Licking her sweetness of spiced apples is all I need,
My veins pulse and thrive
On her smooth intoxicating injection.
Women should not fool themselves
swooning in the hairy arms of men.
Infected with sin that they bring
and forget to wipe their feet at the door.
Nurturing is the spirit of the mother
Who caresses me and takes me to her distant land
Where the sun never ceases to shine
Like glimmering ambassadors at the wake of her smile
Rising in flames of glory at the foot of my bed.
How can they forsaken us?
For such a mesmerizing act of peace.
An artist's hand in a thousand paintings
Couldn't portray the depth of the secrets we have shared.
I blow a whispered kiss,
To she that is like the rain
a coat of delicious beaded pearls
Wet and burgeoning goosebumps on my skin.
Her pigment trades an ivory tone for a warm pink
When she climaxes like a vixen of lust.
I'll take her over one hundred men
Laid out before me as a bridge
So that she and I might step on there sorest spots
To reach the paradise within.
A contest entry
- Homosexuality. by AutumnsFlame.
651 points, ended June 3, 2007, 16 entries
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this was worth my eyes and i am glad i was able to finish reading it. thanks and good luck
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I only read half which is good but the back ground is not a perfect match for a so far good piece i am willing to work something out if you remove this eye blinding back ground but good so far
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very beautiful, very sensual, very true. Beautiful imagery and writing in this poem, great job and good luck in the contest.
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great poem i truly loved it...it makes me think of everything i could have with a women and everything i end up having with a man...a woman seems to make me more happy... why i don't know i truly loved this poem!!
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I thought this was a good poem, but the background makes it hard to read!.... I like the imagery here... the story is pretty good too... thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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i can hear the joy of companionship and the love of another heart. Stunning language. Graceful lyricism and flow. Wonderfully done.
Love, Tom B.
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I love this poem. It's so beautiful.
I felt like I was falling into the sunset
and the water....I'm so sorry you miss
Ashley, but look at what your heart sings.
Love, Lane
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