how can you go and say he's not for me when you don't even know me?
A contest entry
- One line by Lj-.
300 points, ended June 8, 2007, 82 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - One Liners (GIVE ME ALL YOU GOT!) by A Murderous Lament.
600 points, ended June 19, 2007, 74 entries
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Ughh I hate this... This makes me so mad you have know IDea... GREAT LINE Best of luck in the contest and great line!!!
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How Indeed
I like this one better than your other one. This one strikes a personal chord with me because I found myself in the same situation and I know what it's like to feel that way. Maybe there's not a good answer to that question, because I never got one either.
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yeah it happens alot. i dont think there is an answer.
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Opinions are like assholes, and that's how they can. Well penned, best of luck in the contest.
whisper
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Wow
So powerful. I can see the substance of it.
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