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Hurt

Hurts, doesn't it,
when some one you love
walks way,
or when you love someone
more than words can say
but they cant say it back.
Hurts, doesn't it,
when you give your soul
away to someone,
but they cant keep i safe.
Hurts, doesn't it,
when all you breathe
is love
and then they suffocate you.
I hurt.....
  like you'll never know

~@~

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  • PackWolf
    June 3, 2007
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    wow, tis sehr (that means very, soz i use German words sumtimes) powerful Tis good.

  • max power
    June 1, 2007
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    Aww hun this is a very good poem u are very talented, keep on writing more poems,