It's your thought that killed my mind.
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umm this is one line because its for a contest, and im not much for saying alot in one line.
A contest entry
- One line by Lj-.
300 points, ended June 8, 2007, 82 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - One Liners (GIVE ME ALL YOU GOT!) by A Murderous Lament.
600 points, ended June 19, 2007, 74 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sad... Best of luck in the contest and great line!!
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33 -
nice one liner!
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Well if you know how to do it, one liners are very effective. I think even though you aren't into it, you did a nice job with your one liner. Best of luck in the contest.
whisper
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thx =)
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I really like it
I relate. You can be in a popping mood and someone get just blow the wind out of your sail with their
bad mood. This rocks.
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ty=)
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wow! i can relate to this one! great job.
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ty =)
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