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In A Time Of Need

Polluted minds reach a certain boiling point causing one to pray that their hour of death strikes soon.

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  • Black Sunset 2029
    June 2, 2007

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    I love the feel of this poem. Everyone has felt a need to be rid of someone or the need to change something, and that anger that comes of it is so tangible in this line. Nice!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 1, 2007

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    i can't do that, wish death or upon anyone, but i would wish an end to their ways, a change, that is why i agree with this poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    June 1, 2007

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    All polluted minds should reach that boiling point, unfortunately a lot of the polluted minds don't realize they are polluted. Best of luck in the contest.

    whisper


  • Gasp
    June 1, 2007

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    hmm, i dont know as if i totally get this. either way i kind of like it,great flow.

    ~!~keep writing~!~

    ~snowboardingnut~