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Ritual

Loyalty, death, and insecurity are the dark arts to which people follow as a ritual day in and day out just to survive.

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  • Black Sunset 2029
    June 2, 2007

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    So very true. I love this line-and don't we all feel guilty for contributing to the very things that hurt us?
    Amazing job.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 1, 2007

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    hmmmm, you know as i read this i think i have taken part in the ritual myself, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    June 1, 2007

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    Maybe, some people may not have that much depth. Nice write, best of luck to you in the contest.

    whisper


  • Gasp
    June 1, 2007
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    so true. very nice

    ~!~keep writing~!~

    ~snowboardingnut~


  • joleahe
    June 1, 2007
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    wow! short and very powerful! great job!

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