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Darkest Hours

Angels cry to the skies while simple minded humans run blinded by society's darkest lies.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 1, 2007

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    hmmm, you know in a way i agree with you, i think this poem is honest and has a wise point, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    June 1, 2007

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    Very powerful line. I can imagine the angels weeping as today's politicians sell their "truth". Best of luck to you in the contest.

    whisper


  • DancingShadowCorpse
    June 1, 2007
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    You did great with this one liner challenge! This is awesome!


  • Gasp
    June 1, 2007
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    how can angels cry to the skies when there in the skies, =p.