Beneath swelter of clouded night,
two souls converge as one.
Crescendo uttered love's might,
voices passionate longing sung.
Melodic repetition's spill in swells,
two bodies sway in rocking motions.
In a shared dance of stardust veiled ,
eclipse in hungry depths of emotion.
Falling into each other's limpid pools,
a private symphony fill of night's soul.
Wrapped in dance sway till rhythm cools,
two lovers meld in one passion hold.
Lunar spotlight shimmers sparkle bright,
enveloping lovers in pale opulance flight.
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Swaying
I liked the way your words flowed, the sway -heck I was doing that when I was reading it. Describing lovemaking, yet not in an distasteful way.
Bravo to you...
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this was nice
I enjoyed the feel of this love, it was refreshing, full of images that give pleasure ...oozes in inuendos of the night...lovely....it dreams for me ...
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