imagine if you will dear
sitting by yourself
wondering aloud why you didn't
wanna be fond
cause is a beautiful thing they say
like a crisp morning on a bright autumn day
but i have seen the dark side of it
the worst of all is i'm in it
yet i am somehow loving life
the need to forget is my only strife
A contest entry
- Another Anything At All Contest by Poetic Rage.
375 points, ended August 15, 2007, 132 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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I know how you mean... I contenplate these questions within myself all the time, especially why and why not? Nicely done.
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This is pretty good... but I don't know that it's exactly what I'm looking for... I do like it... but could you maybe add more to it? like... explain what happened... that's what I really want. Thanks, and best of luck.
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I LOVE THIS
You are a great poet and you word flow off my toung so easy in this, I say I hope you do well in this contest.
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Great write!
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a fine effort
very expressive writing over themes of isolation and overcoming personal difficulties, optimistic and hopeful...PK
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you spelled found wrong, and i don't get the phrase about wondering aloud, but the rest was short and very meaningful. i think you should focus more on the content, then try and make it rhyme, because you could have some thing brilliant if you just organized this buding thought.
~see you in Barcelona~
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thanks for the comment
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Short with Passion
SO much is said in so little that you have wrote....
Yu came out with so much passion and give it all your soul in every word...
Great Write....
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great
This is a very good poem, I really like it. Can't wait to read more.
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