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~~Jeremy0826~~



My Lifelong Dream



God has a funny way, of giving me the "man of my dreams"

A man a few thousand miles away, at least it seems.

A man of passion, substance, dignity, and respect,

I laugh to God, as there's no flaws in him I detect.

NO way can I have a perfect man, to share life with me,

Yet, he is whom he is, the spirit of the most powerful seed,

God, Our Father, brought forth, this Angel to me,

As the whole world knows, I love him so, my sweet Jeremy.

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Jeremy ever since i started ap you have been my rock, my shoulder to cry on, my best friend. Nothing seems to burden me, when i have you on my side. I thank God daiy for the gift of your love, I love you more than any poem could tell.
~~Vicky~~ June 1, 2007

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  • phoenixonfire
    June 7, 2007
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    Thanks for entering and good luck! hugs n kisses preets :F:F:F

  • Truenobleman
    June 1, 2007
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    Very nice and sweet.

    So much said in such a small amount of time and space. Very mature write.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 1, 2007

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    Lovely,

    It's a true pleasure to know someone so special, and to have them be there for you in anyway today is just down right a blessing! I hear only good things about my new ap brother, and I'm so glad you two have crossed paths, because you both have hearts of gold. Be blessed, and Thanks for being a blessing as well! Peace, and way to go Jeremy!

    Much love always, Timothy~


  • forbidden-colour
    June 1, 2007
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    Ohh That Was So Sweet. Like Smarties Covered In Pure Sugar!!!!
    xxxxxx


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    June 1, 2007

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    This is very beautiful and so
    thoughtful of you! I love it
    and love you too! Thank you very much
    for this wonderful and loving poem
    straight from you heart!



    Jeremy0826

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