"Im no homicide"
This is suicide.
Just thought I’d lay done
My bones on railroad tracks.
Let my skin smear black.
Sun glare down deathly rays.
Anything to make it faster.
&& Im for it.
You see me Mr. Officer.
Tell me, am I pretty enough yet ?
My mirror friends like to lie,
And the hallucinations never fade.
So just bury me now.
Im decomposing under this light.
Please bury me now.
Author notes
I chose Picture 2. And basically its about a girl who commited suicide and now she's talking to the crime investigatiors. weird i know..lol.
A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty Glitter by Lyre-Bird-.
480 points, ended June 23, 2007, 8 entries
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very nice. you start this excellent as always but then it kinda loses its luster at the very end.
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yeah i know the ending is a little...weak. i guess.
this probably not my favorite poem.
but anyways. thank you for the comment and applause.
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