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Stealth

Red lights going,
One by one,
Moving slowly,
Ready for launch.
Green lights show,
Off we go,
80mph in 2 seconds you know.
Reaching up into the sky,
Plummeting back towards the Earth.
90 degrees up,
90 degrees down,
Twisting round,
Up and down.
It takes STEALTH!
Can you?

Author notes

This is a rollercoaster in Thorpe Park, UK, and its awesome, kinda terrifying but absolutely radical! 205 feet high!

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  • myorama
    September 21, 2007
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    Sounds like loads of daring fun. I loved the flow, imagery and movement of this piece. Well done.


  • Melodies
    June 6, 2007
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    Oh, I love this poem!

    I think this poem is so much fun to read... takes the reader on a wild ride! I am capturing it for Poetry Planet! A perfect poem for summertime when kids are going to theme parks! Thank you very much for sharing your wonderful poetry with us!


    • Autumn Whisper
      September 12, 2007
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      Wow! Didn't expect a comment that entusiastic! Thanks very much Melodies!
      Autumn Whisper