Remember how I died
remember how it felt
remember your guiltiness
and my body wrapped in your belt
Remember when i cried
a river full of tears
Remember when we had our bad fights and
and had to put up with each other over the years
so why do I feel
this weird feel
why cant I reveil
the dark I use to sheild
my only secret locked by you
cause ur my only truth
cant tell what was not seen
but everything between
Ive told who I could trust
even though I must
never remember
how it felt.
Remember that night
the night they heard me screamthe night you made me promise
a promise I wouldnt keep
well i remember everything,
everything u did wrong
made me feel how I feel
and my feelings are strong
cant rid or forget
how u treated me with ur regret
I remember
the scars u left
how you told me you would tell
everyone how I was a theft
how I stole your heart
and your bloody guiltiness
how I stole ur best frend
so you brought me down
yes i remember
how could I forget
I will remember forever
why you feel your regret.
Author notes
Option 3...I remember when I was used...it was probably one of the worse moments of my life. I try so hard to forget, the hurt, the pain, the suffering Im going through from it.But no matter what the memory is still here.
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Poems that come from the heart are always the best. I can feel your emotion and I am sorry for your pain. The only suggestion I have is to watch your grammar and punctuation.
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