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Through the Window

With eagerness I started to climb
up the old oak tree,
I had found the perfect place to hide
the perfect place to be,
Binoculars held in nervous hands
I thought to myself 'wow this is grand'.

For through the window in front of me
was a beautiful young woman dancing free,
Her golden hair fell to her hips
I started to quiver, to bite my lips,
She danced around a little bit more
she twizzled and twirled then it
fell to the floor,
Her negligee was gone
she was wearing it no more.

Trying to get a closer look of her
perfectly toned body and curvaceous butt,
I shuffled across my oak tree perch,
with a sudden jolt I started to lerch
forward then to fall.

With binoculars still held in nervous hands
I thought to myself 'this is not so grand',
with a mighty thud I hit the floor
My perverted pleasures were no more.

For standing behind me was a cop in blue
'come with me I've been after you',
For through the window she did see
a peeping tom up the old oak tree.


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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    September 23, 2007
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    LMAO BRILLIANT

    HAHAHAHAHAH, BRILLIANT LMAO. GREAT IMAGERY HERE AS WELL AND GREAT RHYME. WELL DONE SUGAR


  • Swtpoetryman
    July 21, 2007

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    I'm still laughing all the way to the big house!

    For standing behind me was a cop in blue
    'come with me I've been after you',
    For through the window she did see
    a peeping tom up the old oak tree.

    LOL!! The ending was a classic! It sounds like youe were writing about a fellow like me. He! He! But I would have me camera with a telephoto lens and i would have to bring a ladder to climb that tree as I'm not quite as athletic as I uses to be! I prefer hiding in the bushes as it is easier to run away - to live to peep another day - when I'm discoverd with me willy in me hand! LO!!!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Morrigan Trinity
    June 10, 2007

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    Ha! This is hilarious. I love it. It sounds a bit creepy, but Gods only know that I love creepy. Thank you for entering and best of luck.


  • soulfultia gold member
    June 3, 2007

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    A very creative piece, you took the title and ran with it, great job Good luck in this contest, it was certainly a fun one! ~tia