I will find you with another..
Taking the other by the hand-- stopping him...
I will do all that is worth saving you.
I will save your life,
As I will save others,
I will come to you when you need it the most..
And carry you away...
I will save your life from what is danger,
I will grant your wish to be saved.
I wish to personally hug you
So then I may feel the feeling of protecting you.
Sweetly-- in my arms..
I rub your back..
Relaxing you..
I will never stop holding you..
Being there for you..
Ever.
I will always be emotionally here for you.
I will cherish helping souls.
Always.
A contest entry
- friendship and rape - dedication to my friend. by petrichor.
700 points, ended June 2, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Real Friend by faded dreams.
500 points, ended June 23, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is elegant and sweet all in one. I can't think of a more fitting way to show your love for a friend. This outpouring of emotion is so real and overwhelming. Thank you for your entry and good luck!
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Can I have you ap name and real name pleasee?
As for the poem, I like it. Very soothing, in a really different way I've seen to others. It's matter of fact, but really soothing and caring, I really like the tone. =] I think it's a wonderful poem for you to write, really shows that you care for others. Awh, I like it lots, thank you for entering!
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again i love this. you have such talent.this girl must be very lucky to have someone like you in her life.
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I like it...almost soothing...
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