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my wife

my wife has gone for some time
with out a word from me to her
or her to me
our kids has lost there names
because i have been a bad mom and wife too
i haven't call
i left without a say

i haven't hear your voice in sometime
i miss our talks
i miss i love you

i miss out on a our kids life
that aren't even real
i don't remember if you had them or
if i did
this may sound funny
but i still love you

its been some time
since i've see you
i alots been going since i've been gone

you been sick
and so have i
i might not even  know what going on

life is change
but you will be my baby

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tell me what you thinks since i'm on a writer block and its sux

this to my ap wife it supposed to make her laugh. lets see. i love you girl. i miss you too.

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  • Fallen Grace silver member
    June 1, 2007

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    It doesn't suck, its wonderful! Thank you so much! I love you too, very much! I miss our long talks that we used to have almost every night, and I really miss your voice. Thank you again and I will get to work on your poem asap!

    Love your wife,
    ♥ Kaela


    • aloneintheworld
      June 1, 2007
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      aww your welcome hunnie. yea i miss our talks that we had every night when i get back home i'll start talking to you on the phone again. i miss your voice so much too. i know poem thing is funny but personal too.lol well g2g i love you too. love your wife,
      JULIE*