There's a something in your eyes
Makes me feel like I'm a child,
Like walking with my mother
In the rain, feeling so high,
With my baloon up in the sky
Oh, that was such a long time ago
We all know those things must pass
Oh, that was such a long time ago
We all wish that those things would last
I was crying in the wind,
Trying to find where this begins
But all my thoughts just tumbled
Into a jumble of words,
And God was laughing as He does
Oh, but that was yesterday
Today, those things have passed
Oh, that was only yesterday
There's always time to chew that glass
...
And on this tiny ship we sail,
We dream behind our veils,
And on this tiny ship we live,
We who die, we who rise
And on this tiny ship we sing,
We who've drowned, we who've drowned.
Author notes
This is for a contest, it is a song. I didn't know whether I ought to include all that verse/chorus/bridge stuff or not. I decided not because it just clutters up the piece.
A contest entry
- ◄Show Me What You Got!!► by Hebz.
425 points, ended June 8, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think, honest though::
Comments
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Cool Song
I feel like singing it..& yeah, I noticed all about the chorus and bridge..it's quite clear..
Thanks for entering my contest..& Best of Luck
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