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Mirthryl

Priceless treasure, boundless worth
Delved by dwarves ‘neath Middle Earth
Never tarnished, light and strong
Crown of dragon, theme of song

I’m part Haabet by my birth
Hairy toes (for what they’re worth)
Prone to plumpness (here I sigh)
Love garden, family, friends and sky

Spoon-fed punning from my birth
Limp on floor with whelming mirth
The darkest day can gleam some light
If you hit the funny bone just right

In a sea of troubles I’m afloat
Within my little laughter boat
While Mithril’s grand (you can’t deny)
Here’s Mirth-ryl:  laughter by-and-by!


Author notes

'Allo! (greeting or indication of state of my cranial compartment)

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  • crazziladi
    November 10, 2007
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    nice work good luck

  • Stormraven
    November 10, 2007
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    Great poem , thank you for entering my contest , Storm


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    June 6, 2007
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    Great write, thank you so much for entering the contest. Good luck.

    whisper


  • Dark Passion Play
    June 4, 2007
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    Being a Tolkien fanatic, I truly appreciate this poem and your hairy toes! Good job!


  • My Darkness
    June 3, 2007

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    the flow is right on track... i think you have done a wonderful job with this! good luck to you in the contest!


  • reckless abandon
    June 1, 2007

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    I like the rhyme scheme and flow
    and although I don't understand it (but I'm guessing it's just me) it's nicely written.

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