Priceless treasure, boundless worth
Delved by dwarves ‘neath Middle Earth
Never tarnished, light and strong
Crown of dragon, theme of song
I’m part Haabet by my birth
Hairy toes (for what they’re worth)
Prone to plumpness (here I sigh)
Love garden, family, friends and sky
Spoon-fed punning from my birth
Limp on floor with whelming mirth
The darkest day can gleam some light
If you hit the funny bone just right
In a sea of troubles I’m afloat
Within my little laughter boat
While Mithril’s grand (you can’t deny)
Here’s Mirth-ryl: laughter by-and-by!
Author notes
'Allo! (greeting or indication of state of my cranial compartment)
A contest entry
- What's in a name? by whispernthedark.
625 points, ended June 6, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write a Namesake Poem by Stormraven.
1500 points, ended November 27, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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nice work good luck
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Great poem , thank you for entering my contest , Storm


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Great write, thank you so much for entering the contest. Good luck.
whisper
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Being a Tolkien fanatic, I truly appreciate this poem and your hairy toes! Good job!

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the flow is right on track... i think you have done a wonderful job with this! good luck to you in the contest!
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I like the rhyme scheme and flow
and although I don't understand it (but I'm guessing it's just me) it's nicely written.
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