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Abuse

The bruises on the body of this broken child
prove that someone has gone wild

black and blue and purple too
are the proof of what abuse can do

the tears in those eyes, as you poke and prod
caused by the mother, make you feel like a cod

all these children sent in by police
almost cause your heart to cease

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  • heartsshadow
    June 6, 2007
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    indeed...very realist and good