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Where are we now?

Stuck inside this glass,
suffocating slowly,
why does this have to happen?

Condensation builds,
fogging up our vision,
where are we to go now?

It's fragile,
be careful,
do you want to save us?

If not, just let me go,
get out of this,
can you let me out?

Time passes,
and yet still we are,
why don't you talk to me?

Still confused here I lay,
stuck inside,
where are we now?

Please tell me what you think

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  • The Existentialist
    June 3, 2007
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    wow. awesome.


  • reckless abandon
    June 1, 2007

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    Very good write, I like the layout and the ending of it. Sometimes the flow felt a little off, but it was very good overall.

    -KP]
    ^haha, I'm gonna sign things like that