There's a person in the darkness
Watching my every move
A monster in the corner
With everything left to prove
He's waiting for my final plea
My last struggle for air
The force begins to weigh my body down
With nothing left to bare
A demon's waiting to take my life
Yet thrashing me to no end
A violet sea engulfs my skin
I have no resistence left to send
My body convulsing, my ending is near
Brain falling deeper into despair
His hand now holding the gun to my life
Deep into his eyes I stare
My chest is bleeding now
Body mangled on the floor
The world goes blurry, I cannot see
But clearly into vision comes the door...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is AMAZING! i am so jealous, i wish i could write as deep as this!
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Wow, this was amazing work. It flowed pretty well, but i was able to really get into this. I love the fact your were writing how i demon was trying to take over you. i feel like in a way i can relate. great work and keep it up.
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i love how you wasnt afraid to put your full self into this, really great piece!!
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t5his is really great ... i love it and you really put the YOU into it and i love it good job keep writing
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