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My little bundle!!!

Wrapped in blankets
Smothered with love
The cutest face
Sent from above

She is my joy
My reason for living
The rest of my life
All my love I'll be giving

She is my miracle
The light of my life
I know with her
I can make it through strife

I will never forget
How scared I was
All going away
When I saw her head full of fuzz

I dedicate my life
Just to make her happy
I hope she doesn't think her mom
Is to love sappy

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  • Pureisolation
    June 2, 2007

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    Awww...what a beautiful peace. I love how it rymes so well. you are a dwonderfun writer and well i know exactly where you are comming from...


  • Dark Whispers
    June 1, 2007

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    I don't think that was sappy at all, it was very sweet and cute, I just love babies their so precious and love unconditionally. Great write


  • hemp-lover
    June 1, 2007
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    this is great! how old is she?... congrats... and good luck w/ the contest!


  • Celticpoet silver member
    June 1, 2007

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    Sweet!

    I love babies!...although Ive never eaten a whole one!...only joking!...this is a really lovely entry to the contest...well done!...Dan!