My sweet sixteen, a lovely queen
Wake up now and follow your dream
Nowhere to be seen, hiding behind the scene
Get out now and swim on the stream
Sing a song, you’ve got to move along
Coming closer to your sweetest goal
Or write a poem with rhymes so wrong
But it’s okay at least you've learned your lesson
Chorus:
Parties, places, candles, and cakes
There are more to life in store for you
Make-ups, make-outs, gifts and guys
Give more to life; it deserves the best in you
So get ready to be…a revolutionized teen!
Transform yourself; you’re not an elf
Got to stand tall; ready to face them all
Age is not a thing to hinder your big dream
Got to start now we’re waiting for your show
Chorus
Bridge:
Yes you could dance ‘til the wee hours of night
You’re a teen, you’re allowed to that
But yes you should’ve known to be responsible
You’re a teen and I know you can do that!
Chorus
A contest entry
- Music Lyrics! by ForeverFarAway.
360 points, ended March 12, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Masterpiece!
Well done
Goodluck in my contest!
xxx
Eli -
A lovely write here and much appreciated by my 16 year old. Thanks for entering!
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I was reading along and said to myseld it sounds like a song ...then came the chorus ...cool I thought...I could boogie to those words...happy writings ....peace Katie
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Thanks for this amazing write my friend... I appreciate your words and your entry... they mean a lot! Rock on! xoxo Meg
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