If I was taste the memories
Of our past, And try to rekindle
Everything that we lost so fast
You'd wake up from these nightmares
Knowing that you put me out of my misery
Before you could blow out the candles
Of the years we knew would never last...
And now that you're out on your own
And your facing this world all alone
I hope these streets of stone
Never get the chance to chill you to the bone...
You'll always be my best friend
No matter how the situation ends
I just wish you could've found that happy ending
Before you murdered me again,
And now that you've tasted all your sins
This is where the story ends
I ain't doing this again
You'll always be my best friend...
And even if you never really cared
I know theres one thing -- You'll miss about me there
Please don't be scared --
I'll always be there....
Repeat bridge --
Repeat chorus --
My memories -- Are best defined
By that song you love -- About the hands of time
And late tonight when you close your blinds
Look out at the stars one last time
And know that these words burn truer than the night...
Repeat chorus fade out...
Please tell me what you think
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Beautifully done; very open, honest, and forthcoming
I like this..a lot
Happy to have come and read
Blessings to you,
Sandy -
nicely penned
love this one. keep up the great writes....thanks for the comments on my work and allowing me to read and comment on yours... -
that is one of life's lessons in my opinion. put the past behind you, thats all it is the past.
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I love the last stanza. It's beautiful. Yet it's still full of sadness and pain. It feels as though something was lost.
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very good
you would love having that put to music or have you done so already sad but very nice sentiments too you did a good job on this one ,... good write
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this is awesome robert!!!!!!!very beautiful
it is nice to get away from some of your darker writes once in a while. very lovely read, though sad for the subject. take care.
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This is well written , and not as dark as what i was expecting dear... would really like to hear this put to music, such a bittersweet testamony of life gone by.
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Such a bittersweet sadness resonates within these powerful lines. Great lyrical creative flow and depth. This is so tragic, as love does fade. Best wishes to you! Take care!
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A very moving song that brings a tear to my eye as the beautiful within flows freely from the page of life. Real friends dont blow out candles they are the never ending kind that burn forever into the night and yearsand solitaire's the only game in town .... all you gotta do is call you got a friend.....two moving songs .... lyrics just as strong as what you have penned...so brilliantly put the trademark of the one who wears the crown...damn this is going to piss the neighours off to the enth degree.
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