For you, I’m a JUNKIE.
J for jerk-off
U for untouchable
N for neurotic
K for knucklehead
I for idiot
E for exile.
For society, I’m a JUNKIE
J for jail
U for unemployed
N for narcotics user
K for killer
I for institution
E for experiment.
For me, I’m a junkie.
j for judged
u for unwanted
n for nerdy
k for kicked-out
i for ignored
e for the end.
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Comments
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Intereseting, and I like the use of the acrostics.
Thanks for entering!
-Dlvvanzor -
this is okay, not really what i was looking for. the emotion here is stale, and the acrostic itself didn't really have a flow. it felt choppy to me.
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thanks for joining my contest
good luck -
Good acrostic chain. Thanxx for sharing in the contest and good luck.
Luv,
Candy
Contest Holder
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I've never seen a acrostic poem written quite like this. I love how you tell how you are different when dealing with everything. Great job : ]
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I couldn't possible award you a trophy if you are a junkie, you would likely sell it for crack.
Not only that but it isn't very good. I wanted controversy. -
Nice acrostic. Don't see too many of those anymore. This one was very well executed. Good JOb and Good Luck!
Kelly -
This is a very good acrostic well written and thought out. I like the way this was written and how you went about it Thank you for entering will be back to read again.
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this is a great write so powerful
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I do not think that
I have read a more powerful acrostic poem... this is truly wonderful, brutally honest, thought provoking, powerful...
you certainly conveyed a very clear message... intense and definitely a unique perspective...
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I love it!! you did a great job on this poem...showing the different views of a junkie. i loved it...good job...
Susan
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very interesting and unique piece as you label the different junkies well...well done
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That is a different way of writing an acrostic. I l;ike it It shows origonality.
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Thank you.
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Great write!! Last j = i believe you meant judged?!?!?
But don't let e really mean the end !!! It's never the end until it's over e= exception piece in this situation I love it! Good luck in the contest! Betsy
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