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and there it was

i can feel it speeding down the tracks...
they are shaking
and so am i

but it has to be done...


he has done it to me again
and i just can not live through it

the first time was bad enough
i cried
pulled into my tight shell
and left this world


for awhile

then finally
i
got stronger
and came back
thinking i could
handle anything

that came my way

i was right - up to a point

but, when she came back

into the picture
my heart was crushed again

 

now...
"i leave my heart at the train station"
for the paramedics to clean off the tracks
and my soul to be released
returned to another world

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  • a blooming rose
    June 3, 2007
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    this is good


  • Naridill
    June 2, 2007

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    A bit long for contest rules, but brillantly penned. Not whats in my mind, but gave me insight to your mind. Very nicely penned.
    Much luck.


    • purpledragonfly
      June 2, 2007
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      Thanks for hosting the contest - i just got carried away with the prompt and left it in the contest anyway..... Betsy


  • Anastasiya
    June 1, 2007
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    What can I say? Speechless.

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