The alarm went off
The alarm to wake me up for school
I hate school
I hate the work
Work...is utterly pointless
The bus is late
It's alway late
Alway smelling like socks
I forgot to change my socks
Forgot...I seem to do that alot
The class is louder than my iPod
The teacher is louder than the class
Teacher hurts my ears
My ears will be deaf after this
This...is the lamest subject ever
The bell will ring any minute
Ring and end the day!
End this boring excuse for work
Work, which always ends in homework
Homework...the overflow of pain we receive at school
In short...
School reeks.
Author notes
I liked writing like this Cool job coming up with it. I would've done something totally random, but I wanted to try a theme.
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that was good. i only have 1 problem in your 2nd stanza you used "frogot" in your last line. I'm pretty sure that it should be "forgeting" instead of "forgot". other than that you are golden. (wow that's a really corny word "golden")
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