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...Overrated

The world has to have some essence of strangeness.
Strangeness is what makes the world interesting.
If nothing was interesting, think of the horrifying consequences!
Sleeping, waking, and eating would be the horrifying forms of entertainment.
Entertainment...it's overrated.

People have to be individual.
Even twins have to be individual.
I should know this, for I am a twin.
Most people on All Poetry don't know this.
Knowing...is also overrated.

Words can also be individual.
Words can be created and played with.
I like the created word plushy.
Plushy things are soft and cuddly.
Soft and cuddly...yet again, overrated.

Most people think I am weird.
I don't care that they think that.
If I did care, I'd be a fool.
Only the fool takes negative comments to heart.
Negaitve comments...you guessed it...are overrated.

Author notes

Be yourself! If you don't know what you are like (like me) try what you think would sound fun. I'm a total fruitcake with extra nuts and I love it!

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  • Childsight
    June 1, 2007

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    oaky you got the basic concept down. the main problem was in line 4 there is no word that is in line 3. if you could change this it would be great.