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Sing For Me

Jot me a rhyme

 on a napkin,

spread it on your lap,

tap your foot.

 Pick up the spoon,

clang it on the plates,

 and orchestrate

the choir of chimes.

 Whisper to the candles

to die out for tonight.

Lose yourself

 in mosaics on the coasters.

    Dance to the tune

of continuous ripples

 in the wineglass

and sing me

        a silence...

 

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  • Maya Ogwaru
    June 10, 2007

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    I usually don't like this type of poetry! However I must admit this is a really good piece of writting!
    "Sing me a silence" That was your best line on the entire poem and one of the best I've read so far!


  • Sonja
    June 1, 2007

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    Hm...I will have to read more of your poetry, this is something new I can read. Anyhow, I can see your poetic soul within this lines...always with a twist at the end. Anyhow, I like it.
    ~Sonja~


  • IAmAlreadyGone
    June 1, 2007
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    beautiful