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I Can Still Feel You

i can still hear your laugh
as it floats on by in the wind
like a sweet lullaby, for only my ears to hear

i can still smell your perfume,
as if it was just sprayed
wafting to me, as if coming from a spot, not so far away

i still dream that dream
in which i am with you
and we're walking down the sand forever

i still feel your warmth
at night when i am cold
you hold me in your embrace, promising never to let go

i feel your heart beat, against mine
while we hug in happiness
while we embrace in sadness

i feel your love
even when i think i am alone
but you will alway be in my heart.

Author notes

Angie, i still miss you like i cant even explain. You were my everything before you passed on, and your still my everything. i cant imagine my life if you were never in it. the way you lived you life, made me want to be a better person, and a better sister.
i love ya sis
catt~

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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    August 14, 2007

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    awwww :(

    You really know how to pull at our heart strings don't ya? Wow. That was... insanely depressing... yet beautifully written. I like the very soft tone to this poem, as well as the images you create with it. It reminds me of an Evanescence song, the name escapes me at the present moment but it's number 8 off "The Open Door" album. (I noticed that you like Evanescence, too).
    This really was a powerful, touching write. Keep up the good work!
    I'm sorry about your sis. I can't imagine what that must be like.