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WonderingForever

WonderingForever,
is a name I named myself.
WonderingForever,
because I have nothing more to do.
I wonder about my future,
I wonder about what is ahead.
I wonder about my future.
I'll wonder forever.
That's why I named myself,
WonderingForever.
I used to be another,
a name that didn't fit me.
This one does,
because I'm Wonderer.
I wonder about what will happen tommorow,
will it be bad or good?
I wonder,
because I have nothing more to do.
Wondering is something I do,
because it helps me from remembering.
Forever is one thing no one can have,
but I know I can wonder forever until my time comes.
WonderingForever,
that's my name.
It's the name I can call my own.
No one else can call themselves that here,
and it makes me feel happy.
To have a name of my own,
a name to call myself.
WonderingForever,
that's me.
WonderingForever,
the name I call my own.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    June 5, 2007

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    Not everyone is lucky enough to just know what it is they want from life. I think a lot of people can relate to your words, of course I wonder, what will be? Nicely written. Thank you for entering the contest. good luck.

    whisper

  • My Darkness
    June 3, 2007

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    you said i wonder about my future twice... i don't believe the repeatitiveness is completely necessary, but good write and good luck..

  • my imaginary friend
    June 1, 2007

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    very nice, this flows well. it is excellent good work i love this ending. goodluck with the contest i'm sure you will do well